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School of Professional Studies Course: PHIL 203 WB8W1, Ethics Day/Time: Tuesdays, August 29 October 17, 2017 Time: 6pm- 9pm Location: Waterbury Course Description: Philosophy 203 surveys five moral and political theories: utilitarianism, libertarianism, Kantian ethics, welfare liberalism, and virtue ethics. The course emphasizes understanding, evaluating, and applying these theories. Instructor: Charles Phillips PhD Email: cphillip@bridgeport.edu Required Readings: 1. Ursula K. Le Guin, The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas (this reading is attached at the end of this syllabus) 2. Michael J. Sandel, Justice:What s the Right Thing to Do? (Publisher: Farrar, Straus and Giroux; ISBN: 978-0-374-18065-2) To order textbooks, go to the bookstore website at: Learning Outcomes: Upon completion of this course the student should be able to: Learn major types of ethical discourse Learn to apply ethical concepts (language/analysis) to ethical questions and dilemmas Gain skill at reading philosophical works; Learn major types of ethical argument; Learn key arguments of selected figures in philosophical ethics; Further develop their communication skills; Assignments: 1. Reading Assignments: Each week, you will assigned readings in Michael J. Sandel s Justice: What s the Right Thing to Do? Before class begins, you should identify and reflect on the moral issues that the reading raises. Come to class prepared to share your reflections. 2. Journal Entries: You will write a two-three page journal entry on a moral issue raised in the assigned readings each week (of the first 7 weeks). I. For your first journal entry, you should address the following question based on Ursula K. Le Guin s The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas : If you were living in Omelas and you saw the child in the basement, what would you do, and why? Utilize indirect quotes from the readings to support your assertions. (The rubric for later journal entries will be posted on Canvas.) 3. Oral Presentations: You will give two 10-15 minute presentation on a moral issue raised in the assigned reading (Guidelines for your oral presentation will be posted on Canvas). 4. The last week you will write a wrap up paper(guidelines will be posted on Canvas).

5. Post an entry on the discussion board each week by Monday and respond to the postings of at least two other students. I. For the first week provide a self-introduction following the directions on Canvas. Grading Criteria: 1. Class Participation (15%) 2. Journal Entries (45%) 3. Two Oral Presentations (20%) 4. Wrap up Paper (10%) 5. Canvas Discussion (10%) Description of Weekly Sessions: WEEK 1 (August 29) Reading: Ursula K. Le Guin, The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas (at end of syllabus), Michael J. Sandel, Justice, Chapters 1-2 Due: 1 st Journal Entry WEEK 2 (September 5) Reading: Michael J. Sandel, Justice. Chapter 3 Due: 2 nd Journal Entry WEEK 3 (September 12) Reading: Michael J. Sandel, Justice, Chapter 4 Due: 3 rd Journal Entry WEEK 4 (September 19) Reading: Michael J. Sandel, Justice, Chapter 5 Due: 4 th Journal Entry WEEK 5 (September 26) Reading: Michael J. Sandel, Justice, Chapter 6 Due: 5 th Journal Entry WEEK 6 (October 3) Reading: Michael J. Sandel, Justice, Chapter 7 Due: 6 th Journal Entry WEEK 7 (October 10) Reading: Michael J. Sandel, Justice, Chapter 8 Due: 7 th Journal Entry WEEK 8 (October 17) Reading: Michael J. Sandel, Justice, Chapter 9-10 Wrap up Paper Student Presentations

Ursula K. Le Guin, The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas With a clamor of bells that set the swallows soaring, the Festival of Summer came to the city Omelas, bright-towered by the sea. The rigging of the boats in harbor sparkled with flags. In the streets between houses with red roofs and painted walls, between old moss-grown gardens and under avenues of trees, past great parks and public buildings, processions moved. Some were decorous: old people in long stiff robes of mauve and grey, grave master workmen, quiet, merry women carrying their babies and chatting as they walked. In other streets the music beat faster, a shimmering of gong and tambourine, and the people went dancing, the procession was a dance. Children dodged in and out, their high calls rising like the swallows' crossing flights over the music and the singing. All the processions wound towards the north side of the city, where on the great water-meadow called the Green Fields boys and girls, naked in the bright air, with mudstained feet and ankles and long, lithe arms, exercised their restive horses before the race. The horses wore no gear at all but a halter without bit. Their manes were braided with streamers of silver, gold, and green. They flared their nostrils and pranced and boasted to one another; they were vastly excited, the horse being the only animal who has adopted our ceremonies as his own. Far off to the north and west the mountains stood up half encircling Omelas on her bay. The air of morning was so clear that the snow still crowning the Eighteen Peaks burned with white-gold fire across the miles of sunlit air, under the dark blue of the sky. There was just enough wind to make the banners that marked the racecourse snap and flutter now and then. In the silence of the broad green meadows one could hear the music winding through the city streets, farther and nearer and ever approaching, a cheerful faint sweetness of the air that from time to time trembled and gathered together and broke out into the great joyous clanging of the bells. Joyous! How is one to tell about joy? How describe the citizens of Omelas? They were not simple folk, you see, though they were happy. But we do not say the words of cheer much any more. All smiles have become archaic. Given a description such as this one tends to make certain assumptions. Given a description such as this one tends to look next for the King, mounted on a splendid stallion and surrounded by his noble knights, or perhaps in a golden litter borne by great-muscled slaves. But there was no king. They did not use swords, or keep slaves. They were not barbarians. I do not know the rules and laws of their society, but I suspect that they were singularly few. As they did without monarchy and slavery, so they also got on without the stock exchange, the advertisement, the secret police, and the bomb. Yet I repeat that these were not simple folk, not dulcet shepherds, noble savages, bland utopians. They were not less complex than us. The trouble is that we have a bad habit, encouraged by pedants and sophisticates, of considering happiness as something rather stupid. Only pain is intellectual, only evil interesting. This is the treason of the artist: a refusal to admit the banality of evil and the terrible boredom of pain. If you can't lick 'em, join 'em. If it hurts, repeat it. But to praise despair is to condemn delight, to embrace violence is to lose hold of everything else. We have almost lost hold; we can no longer describe a happy man, nor make any celebration of joy. How can I tell you about the people of Omelas? They were not naive and happy children--though their children were, in fact, happy. They were mature, intelligent, passionate adults whose lives were not wretched. O miracle! but I wish I could describe it better. I wish I could convince you. Omelas sounds in my words like a city in a fairy tale, long ago and far away, once upon a time. Perhaps it would be best if you imagined it as your own fancy bids, assuming it will rise to the occasion, for certainly I cannot suit you all. For instance, how about technology? I think that there would be no cars or helicopters in and above the streets; this follows from the fact that the people of Omelas are happy people. Happiness is based on a just discrimination of what is necessary, what is neither necessary nor destructive, and what is destructive. In the middle

category, however--that of the unnecessary but undestructive, that of comfort, luxury, exuberance, etc.--they could perfectly well have central heating, subway trains, washing machines, and all kinds of marvelous devices not yet invented here, floating light-sources, fuelless power, a cure for the common cold. Or they could have none of that; it doesn't matter. As you like it. I incline to think that people from towns up and down the coast have been coming in to Omelas during the last days before the Festival on very fast little trains and double-decked trams, and that the train station of Omelas is actually the handsomest building in town, though plainer than the magnificent Farmers' Market. But even granted trains, I fear that Omelas so far strikes some of you as goody-goody. Smiles, bells, parades, horses, bleh. If so, please add an orgy. If an orgy would help, don't hesitate. Let us not, however, have temples from which issue beautiful nude priests and priestesses already half in ecstasy and ready to copulate with any man or woman, lover or stranger, who desires union with the deep godhead of the blood, although that was my first idea. But really it would be better not to have any temples in Omelas--at least, not manned temples. Religion yes, clergy no. Surely the beautiful nudes can just wander about, offering themselves like divine souffles to the hunger of the needy and the rapture of the flesh. Let them join the processions. Let tambourines be struck above the copulations, and the glory of desire be proclaimed upon the gongs, and (a not unimportant point) let the offspring of these delightful rituals be beloved and looked after by all. One thing I know there is none of in Omelas is guilt. But what else should there be? I thought at first there were not drugs, but that is puritanical. For those who like it, the faint insistent sweetness of drooz may perfume the ways of the city, drooz which first brings a great lightness and brilliance to the mind and limbs, and then after some hours a dreamy languor, and wonderful visions at last of the very arcana and inmost secrets of the Universe, as well as exciting the pleasure of sex beyond belief; and it is not habitforming. For more modest tastes I think there ought to be beer. What else, what else belongs in the joyous city? The sense of victory, surely, the celebration of courage. But as we did without clergy, let us do without soldiers. The joy built upon successful slaughter is not the right kind of joy; it will not do; it is fearful and it is trivial. A boundless and generous contentment, a magnanimous triumph felt not against some outer enemy but in communion with the finest and fairest in the souls of all men everywhere and the splendor of the world's summer: this is what swells the hearts of the people of Omelas, and the victory they celebrate is that of life. I really don't think many of them need to take drooz. Most of the procession have reached the Green Fields by now. A marvelous smell of cooking goes forth from the red and blue tents of the provisioners. The faces of small children are amiably sticky; in the benign grey beard of a man a couple of crumbs of rich pastry are entangled. The youths and girls have mounted their horses and are beginning to group around the starting line of the course. An old woman, small, fat, and laughing, is passing out flowers from a basket, and tall young men wear her flowers in their shining hair. A child of nine or ten sits at the edge of the crowd, alone, playing on a wooden flute. People pause to listen, and they smile, but they do not speak to him, for he never ceases playing and never sees them, his dark eyes wholly rapt in the sweet, thin magic of the tune. He finishes, and slowly lowers his hands holding the wooden flute. As if that little private silence were the signal, all at once a trumpet sounds from the pavilion near the starting line: imperious, melancholy, piercing. The horses rear on their slender legs, and some of them neigh in answer. Sober-faced, the young riders stroke the horses' necks and soothe them, whispering, "Quiet, quiet, there my beauty, my hope..." They begin to form in rank along the starting line. The crowds along the racecourse are like a field of grass and flowers in the wind. The Festival of Summer has begun.

Do you believe? Do you accept the festival, the city, the joy? No? Then let me describe one more thing. In a basement under one of the beautiful public buildings of Omelas, or perhaps in the cellar of one of its spacious private homes, there is a room. It has one locked door, and no window. A little light seeps in dustily between cracks in the boards, secondhand from a cobwebbed window somewhere across the cellar. In one corner of the little room a couple of mops, with stiff, clotted, foul-smelling heads stand near a rusty bucket. The floor is dirt, a little damp to the touch, as cellar dirt usually is. The room is about three paces long and two wide: a mere broom closet or disused tool room. In the room a child is sitting. It could be a boy or a girl. It looks about six, but actually is nearly ten. It is feeble-minded. Perhaps it was born defective, or perhaps it has become imbecile through fear, malnutrition, and neglect. It picks its nose and occasionally fumbles vaguely with its toes or genitals, as it sits hunched in the corner farthest from the bucket and the two mops. It is afraid of the mops. It finds them horrible. It shuts its eyes, but it knows the mops are still standing there; and the door is locked; and nobody will come. The door is always locked; and nobody ever comes, except that sometimes--the child has no understanding of time or interval--sometimes the door rattles terribly and opens, and a person, or several people, are there. One of them may come in and kick the child to make it stand up. The others never come close, but peer in at it with frightened, disgusted eyes. The food bowl and the water jug are hastily filled, the door is locked, the eyes disappear. The people at the door never say anything, but the child, who has not always lived in the tool room, and can remember sunlight and its mother's voice, sometimes speaks. "I will be good," it says. "Please let me out. I will be good!" They never answer. The child used to scream for help at night, and cry a good deal, but now it only makes a kind of whining, "eh-haa, eh-haa," and it speaks less and less often. It is so thin there are no calves to its legs; its belly protrudes; it lives on a half-bowl of corn meal and grease a day. It is naked. Its buttocks and thighs are a mass of festered sores, as it sits in its own excrement continually. They all know it is there, all the people of Omelas. Some of them have come to see it, others are content merely to know it is there. They all know that it has to be there. Some of them understand why, and some do not, but they all understand that their happiness, the beauty of their city, the tenderness of their friendships, the health of their children, the wisdom of their scholars, the skill of their makers, even the abundance of their harvest and the kindly weathers of their skies, depend wholly on this child's abominable misery. This is usually explained to children when they are between eight and twelve, whenever they seem capable of understanding; and most of those who come to see the child are young people, though often enough an adult comes, or comes back, to see the child. No matter how well the matter has been explained to them, these young spectators are always shocked and sickened at the sight. They feel disgust, which they had thought themselves superior to. They feel anger, outrage, impotence, despite all the explanations. They would like to do something for the child. But there is nothing they can do. If the child were brought up into the sunlight out of that vile place, if it were cleaned and fed and comforted, that would be a good thing indeed; but if it were done, in that day and hour all the prosperity and beauty and delight of Omelas would wither and be destroyed. Those are the terms. To exchange all the goodness and grace of every life in Omelas for that single, small improvement: to throw away the happiness of thousands for the chance of the happiness of one: that would be to let guilt within the walls indeed. The terms are strict and absolute; there may not even be a kind word spoken to the child. Often the young people go home in tears, or in a tearless rage, when they have seen the child and faced this terrible paradox. They may brood over it for weeks or years. But as time goes on they

begin to realize that even if the child could be released, it would not get much good of its freedom: a little vague pleasure of warmth and food, no doubt, but little more. It is too degraded and imbecile to know any real joy. It has been afraid too long ever to be free of fear. Its habits are too uncouth for it to respond to humane treatment. Indeed, after so long it would probably be wretched without walls about it to protect it, and darkness for its eyes, and its own excrement to sit in. Their tears at the bitter injustice dry when they begin to perceive the terrible justice of reality, and to accept it. Yet it is their tears and anger, the trying of their generosity and the acceptance of their helplessness, which are perhaps the true source of the splendor of their lives. Theirs is no vapid, irresponsible happiness. They know that they, like the child, are not free. They know compassion. It is the existence of the child, and their knowledge of its existence, that makes possible the nobility of their architecture, the poignancy of their music, the profundity of their science. It is because of the child that they are so gentle with children. They know that if the wretched one were not there sniveling in the dark, the other one, the flute-player, could make no joyful music as the young riders line up in their beauty for the race in the sunlight of the first morning of summer. Now do you believe in them? Are they not more credible? But there is one more thing to tell, and this is quite incredible. At times one of the adolescent girls or boys who go to see the child does not go home to weep or rage, does not, in fact, go home at all. Sometimes also a man or woman much older falls silent for a day or two, and then leaves home. These people go out into the street, and walk down the street alone. They keep walking, and walk straight out of the city of Omelas, through the beautiful gates. They keep walking across the farmlands of Omelas. Each one goes alone, youth or girl, man or woman. Night falls; the traveler must pass down village streets, between the houses with yellow-lit windows, and on out into the darkness of the fields. Each alone, they go west or north, towards the mountains. They go on. They leave Omelas, they walk ahead into the darkness, and they do not come back. The place they go towards is a place even less imaginable to most of us than the city of happiness. I cannot describe it at all. It is possible that it does not exist. But they seem to know where they are going, the ones who walk away from Omelas.

Academic Reflection Journal and Presentation Evaluation RUBRIC Evaluating academic reflection journals is as challenging as evaluating class discussions and other course work performed in the traditional class setting. Other than for an easily quantifiable quiz, it is difficult to offer simple and objective evaluation criteria. What follows is a rubric that has proven to be a useful guide in evaluating your reflection and research papers. The instructor will be using the following grading scale: 1. Journal entries and presentations which meet the demands of the assignment will be graded with a B+ or B. These assignments will include at least the following: Each entry is posted and/or paper (presentation) is received on time. Opinions, comments, and observations are offered in depth (avoid brief comments in telegraphic style; no "how r u, gr8" for how are you, great"). This does not mean that everything you write should be longggggg. Reflection and presentation assertions must relate clearly and directly to the readings (including "direct quotes" from the assigned readings to support your position). Your journal entries and presentation must indicate an understanding of the issues. Generally, your reflection journal entries and presentation should seek to further the discussion on key issues. 2. Journal entries and presentations which go beyond the demands of the assignment will be graded with an A or A-. These assignments will include all of the requirements for a B or B+ above. In addition, A or A- entries and papers will: Show deeper analytical or inferential thinking, demonstrating insightful understandings. Offer comments that are particularly perceptive, while they are also supported with direct quotes from the readings. Provide strong, precise, and thoughtfully selected support for assertions. Synthesize and evaluate experiences related to course topics and/or issues of importance as described in our course objectives. Propose changes and relate material to person experience demonstrating an ability to apply the material to propose solutions and/or advocate for unheard voices related to social inequities and justice issues. Pose good questions (i.e., questions that further discussion and reflection). Link to topics/issues from earlier readings [from this course and/or other courses] and current readings/web resources. 3. Journal entries and presentations which do not meet the demands of the assignment will be graded with a B- C+, C, or D. Although it is NOT expected that these types of assignments will be created, it is likely that they would:

Arrive late or contain insufficient details, or Not be clear or understandable, or Not use direct quotes from the assigned readings or not relate to these readings or other Internet resources in an appropriate and/or thoughtful way [or misrepresent them], or Contain only detailed description of local experiences with no evidence of reflection or synthesis, or Contain only opinion, with no descriptive details or supporting quotes from theory or research. Please note that it is important to check your work for spelling and grammatical correctness and to follow guidelines for effective presentations. Presentation Evaluation 1. Interest. Was the presentation interesting? Did it grab the audience s attention? 2. Thesis. Did the speaker clearly present a thesis and support it with rationale and evidence? 3. Logical Argument. Was the material logically and effectively explained to enhance audience understanding of the material? 4. Evidence. Did the presenter explain the data and analysis with sufficient depth? 5. Were the speaking style and grammar appropriate for an academic audience? 6. Conclusion. Did the speech have a clear conclusion?