Reading the Writing Process: Toward a Theory of Current Pedagogies

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University of South Carolina Scholar Commons Faculty Publications English Language and Literatures, Department of 12-1-1987 Reading the Writing Process: Toward a Theory of Current Pedagogies Steven Lynn University of South Carolina - Columbia, lynns@mailbox.sc.edu Follow this and additional works at: http://scholarcommons.sc.edu/engl_facpub Part of the English Language and Literature Commons Publication Info Published in College English, Volume 49, Issue 8, 1987, pages 902-910. Lynn, S. (1987). Reading the Writing Process: Toward a Theory of Current Pedagogies. College English, 49(8), 902-910. Copyright 1987 by the National Council of Teachers of English. All rights reserved. This Article is brought to you for free and open access by the English Language and Literatures, Department of at Scholar Commons. It has been accepted for inclusion in Faculty Publications by an authorized administrator of Scholar Commons. For more information, please contact SCHOLARC@mailbox.sc.edu.

Steven Lynn Reading the Writing Process: Toward a Theory of Current Pedagogies Physicists (so the scitnce digests tell lis) have recently begun to imagine the: pos sibility of a theof)' that combines the qualilum forces. g"... ity. and electromag neticism. there by providing the basis {or an e~planation of any physical evenl. the ultimale Theory of Everylhing. o r T.O.E. as Ihey call it. In recent years writing teachers might well appear to be closing in on their own T.O.E.. a theoretical and praclical consensiis about writing and its nurture. Becausc We Seem to agree so overvo'helmingly on fundamental isslics (there may be teachers reo sistant to '" teach process no! prodllct.'" but they will soon be olllnllmbered by members of the Flat Earth Society). recent effons to di still$lli,h differenl vcr sions of.. process pedag<:>gy'" have been utremdy vaillable. In particlilar. lame<! Berlin's "Contemporary Composition: The Major Ped agogical Theori es"' and l.ester Faigl ey's '"Compeling Theories o f I"rocess: A Critiqlle and a Proposal" mastenully analyze and order an astonishing body of,, orl<. helping us think in broad theoretical terms abolll differenl vitws of rom posing-to Ilnderstand " 'here " 'e are and " 'hat we are doing. Berlin defines r... r compeling pedagogics (Arislotelian. Neo Platonic. Currenl Tr.tditional. and Epistemic ). whic h are dist inguished by lheir diffe.-ent epistemologits. Faigl<y identifies three "jews of co mposing (ex pr«siye. cogniti' e. social). which derive. " 'e may infer. from theori,t, ' differing goals---lo roster "authentic"",, riting. to construct models of mental processes. or to expose the historical and cultural determinants of writing. These and other surveys (by William F. Wood. and Richard Fulkerson. (or example) are po" 'erful in their penetrating «"""my. But it may also be uscf"l at Ihi s poinlto explore the poiential ora different approach. My premise is lhat the in deplh analysis of a few selected texis might well furl her illuminate lhe diver sity or process pedagogic. available. In "'her words. rather than a ttempt another broad survey. 1 " 'ill apply to three representative theoretical statements the sort of close reading that only recentl y would have been reserved for the literary canon. bllt has proven increasingl y fenile in hi storiography. popular cullure. phi. Iosoph y. the history of sc iencc. and other fields. The assumption behind such close reading is that any tui may yield imponanl in sight inlo i ~ s particular field Al Ihr Um;ftf>ll y of Sou, h CarotiN. So... L l"",...,... <"""". ;" <,.;.",.IIIw:o<y. rii:n.. ",h-<:.","'y t;,...,"",. ond 'hr h;w>ry of... <>ri<. H... ""bh,hr<l on S-.. t ""'''''''' ond.~«"'h-<:.",",y... 00< om ;, "";t.,. 0 book "" Jolt."""... 0«""""",,;"". College English. Volume 49. Number II. December 1987." COp)lD&ht ~ 19l1J by the N.tional Cmllloil aft.oello", ofe",1wl All ",his ".. "",d

R~ading 1M W.;t;ng I'mcns 903 of knowle<lg('. Thus. anyone of a multitude of lexis might have been... Iected [Of thi s project. but the three chosen are obviously weil-known and inhuemial, Max ine Hairston's " The Winds of Chang(" llwma, Kuhn and the Revolution in Ihe Teac hing of Writing." C. H. KnoblauCh and Lil Brannon's RhNWkol nodi/ion. and Ih~ T~ach;ng o!wd/ing. and Ann E. Benhoffs Fwming. Thinting. Writing: Thr Comp<>.ing Imaginalian. Each of these works typifies a panicular orientati.m; taken together. some interesting and surprising relal ions hips emerge. There i. 10 be,ure. a useful study to be wriuen On the g('nealogy of proce.. teaching. lracing current practices back to Briuon. Graves. Moffen. Langer. Klein. Dewey. Vygotsky, and olhers. But l want to raise in this essay the question of where we are. not how we got here. Therefore. I examine closely the conception of process pedagogy Ihat each of Ihese tnts enacts. How these versions of process pedagogy_ Hairston s. BenhoWs. and Knoblauch and Brannon's--<Jiffer can be seen most immedialely in their conceptions of what writing is. For Hairston. writing is "a recur.;ive rather than a linear process" ; pre--wriling and revision are "aclivilies 1hat overlap and inlenwine" (86). This familiar perspe<:tive may not al lirst glance appear far removed from Knoblauch and Brdnnon', a"umplion Ihal wriling is an organic. undifferenti ated proces$" (90). In practice, however. lhe contrast is great. If writing is alive. Or organic." it cannot be dissecte<l without injury; if it has no identifiable pans. or is undifferenliated." then it cannoi be divided and analyud. Thus. rool sur prisingly, Hai rston assumes thai the process approach' 'teaches.trategies for in vention and discovery" as well u pancrn. for connecting ideas. while Knoblauch and Brannon di"ountthe possibility of "teaching" writing in the usual se nse. Tltey reject any " production recipe" (S8). or heuristic. maintaining "'teachers cannot provide studenl. wilh 'skill s' of 1hinKing or 'skill s' of forming assertions and connecting them as discourse." Teachers. they.ay. can only.'create incentives aoo context. for thinking and writinl;" (93). Accordins to Berthoff. "Composing- pulling things together_ is a continuum. a proccs$ that continues without any sharp breah" (11 ). This rormulalion suggesl. both the organic. undifferentiate<l activity of Knoblauch and Bran non (it is "a continuum." BerthofT says) and lhe overtapping. intenwinin8 stages of Hairston (it seems to have distinguishable activities. although these proceed. as Berlhoff says. "without any sharp breah"). Similarly. Berthoff say. her book presents "everylhing al once" (4). a strategy Ihal al firsl glance accord. with the conception of an undifferentialed process. But what does such a statemenl mean when applied 10 a wrillen tcxt~ Even if it were possible to present "everything at once" in writing. the prior existcnce of discrete pari' that are collected and n~ibited.imul1aneously would..,em "... nlial. In the final analy si. it is difficult to say whelher wriling is in BertholT's opinion "undifferenlialed;' although she may Ihink it pedagogically advisable 10 presenl ilthat way. Given Berthoffs inl eresting all at-once pedagogy and her ambivalence on the nature of wriling. we may well wonder about the feasihility and value of teaching. Benhoff tells Siudents " You are born a composer" (46) and "'We are Com poser, by virtue of being human" (t2). thus appearing. like Knoblauch and Brannon. to downplay the importance of teaching. BUI Berthoffal.., complicales

904 College Engli sh this innatist position by distinguishing writing from composing: while we learn ""e are born composers in One place, else... here we read... e aren't born know. ing how to write."' Instead... e all' born knowing how to know how" (II). If... e already know ho... to know how. then teaching is at best auxillary. creating at best "incentives and contexts."' as Knoblauch and Brannon say, Again. however. BerthofTcomplicates this position: "Up to a point."' she says... riting can be explained and taught as a skill."' although beyond that point. it is "more Ihan a skill." "more than a crao" (II), Ikrlhotrs li't ofwhal her book will leach ils readers looks unmysler>ous. very much like a differenti aled model of the composing techniques. moving from " How to get starled writ ing" to " How to know when 10 slop" (ii). In bel"ieen the entry and exit of writ ing. Benhoff lists other aclivilies that would probably be considered "skills": " How 10 repeal yourself on purpose wilh effecls thai you are controhing." Ho... to define. limit. expand. eliminate, amalgamate, subordinate. coordinate. recapitulate." In fact, the series of readings and exercises designed to develop these capabilities. the bul k of her book. is organized in a way that Hairston, or even Aluander Bain... ould find familia" lisling and classifying is follo""ed by naming and defining. follo... ed by specifying and supporting. and so forth. Even so, what,",'e might call anti pedagogical statemen1s recur in Benhotrs book: "You can set aboullearning to write. confident thai cqmposition is nqt a maner of hammering togelher WQrds and phrases. sentences and paragraphs. accqrding to Siandard panem, that oomebody else lell. yqu tq superimpose" (46); "When you write. yq\l don't folio... SQmebody else's scheme; you design your own. As a wriler you learn to make words behave the way you wanl them to" (II). This idea thai "s1andard pallerns"' are nn helpful appears to be based on the assumption lhat each act of composing is unique. thus requiring the... riler 10 invenl a "scheme" for each panicular occasion, Hairston lakes for granled t he idea of distinguishable kind s. telling us Ihat process teachers make "rhetorically based" writing a"ignments. allowing their studenls to praclice "a variely of writing modes. expressive as well as expository" (86). Thus llairston's position on "standard pa11erns"' musl be aligned... ith Bertho(f"s direclions on "'how 10" perform this or that activity ("define. limit. expand;' an d SQ forth). Kn oblauch and Brannon. ho""ever. rejecllhe idea of practicing different 'modes. and their remarks obviously accord with Benho(f", emphasis on the uniqueness of eaeh act of composing. In Knoblauch and Brannon ' s classrooms "there', no syllabus to cover. no ne.t 'mode' to practice. no compelling reason 10 deny Ihe opponunity for gcning closer 10 an issue Ihan syllabus-centered classes are able to do" (III). I n their minds. classifying aims and modes is as pointless as idenlifying the activities involved in ""riling. If aims and modes could be identified. we may speculate. Ihen recurrent rhetorical strategie, could be isolated. thu s opening the door 10 reproducible pat lerns. thereby contradicting the notion Ihal we must make our own schemes. Hence. when Berthoff says that "'storylelling and Mpo,ition have a 101 in common" (3)_ calling int o queslion the distinctiveness of Ihese Iwo genres. she is. like Knoblauch and Brannon. undennining the idea of pall ems and modes. Al

R~ading,h Writing Process 90S Ihe same lime, I,.. hen Benhoff proceeds 10 Ihe bolder claim Ihal "The miscon, ceplion of affeclive and cognilive domains is responsible for much of lhe Irouble we have currently in teaching reading and wriling" (3), she is, like HairslOn, as, su ming the existence of "'parate domains of discourse: we see exposit ion (tilat which has successive generalizations) and storytell ing (Ihat which doe. not): and we a lso.ee " affective and cognitive domains," a division apparently analogous to storytelling and ex posilion, By the same loken, Bcrthofrs as<ertion Ihat lhe book wi ll offer "lois of repetition" (4) sugeesls there are aspecls of writing thai arc repeatable, or at least aspect. oflalk about it thai arc reproducible, Yet Be rthoff scems eliger both 10 o!>scure and drow attention 10 this repetition: even lhough we are advised the book is "full of echoes" (S),,'''e are also lold these will noi he pointed out. If somc:thil\i " isn't remembered," she says, "the mere mention will not heip, and if it is remembered, why spoil the fun'" The stronge ness ofthi. remark (i,n't "mere menlion" often enough 10 bring back a flood of mc:mories and conneclions, and wouldn't the satisfaclion of having our connee' tions confinned en hance " the fun," not 10 mention our knowledge?) can be e~plained on strategical grounds: drawing ailention to the shared features of the various "e ~ erci,e." would undennine Berthotr. thc5i' regarding the uniquely creative status of every wri ting act and the illusory stalus of domains of dis Course, These ideu are enentiallo her claim that wrilers invent their own schemes and pauerns, In other words, Berthoff in some respects appears to endorse what Hai rston call' an a xiom of process teac hing, that wriling is "a disciplined creative a,tivity thai can be analy~ed a nd described" and, more importantly, "Iaught" (' 'Wind s" 86)_ Vet she also appears to ac,qmmo<iate Knohlauch and Brannon'. notion of an undifferentiated process beyond valid analysis Qr parlitioning into skills. Benhotrs name for her exercises, "assisted invitati ons," reflects the am_ bivalence of her stance, An invitaliqn is a stimulus, an QPportunity, an opening allowi ng students to discover Ihings for lhem,elves; yel "assisled" suggests an inslructional role for the teachcr_ o/fcrillll help, analysis, perhaps even "teaching," Similarly, when Berthoff say, "form_finding and form--crealing is a nalural activity" (2), her singular ve rb tends tq obscure the importance difference in "form-finding" (locating and seleeling a pattern of discourse appropriale for a particular utterance), and "form_('"ming" (invenling a unique structure out of unshaped materials): focusing on Qne term m the other implies a «rikingly dif, ferent pedagogy_ If classifying aims and modes is suspicious, what Qf another kind of classificalion-grading? Knoblauch and Brannon's altitude toward grading is, rout surprisingl y, philqsophically consistent with Iheir view Qf a.. ignment. an d aims and modn, In other words, such classifications a re untenable, and they advocale abandoning the role of " Arbiter or Judge," NOI only, they say, is il "e~ tr cme\y difficult to delermine" "whelher or not a second draft represents improvement over a fir.;t draft in some Qbjective sense," bui also such classificalion. are "irrelevant to Ihe value of the process itself" (133), Thus, the "idea of response" fo r them "is to offer perceplions of uncertainty, incompleteness, unfulfilled

promises, unreali~ed opportunities, as motivation for more writing and therefore more learning" (123), Although Knoblauch and Brannon do in fact claim that un' fini shing students' text, this way produces "more learning about a subject as well as more succe.. ful communkation of whatever ha. been leame<l" (1 23), we,liould keep in mind that perception, of such success are for Ihem "extremcly difficult" and "irrelevant." More writing, more learning, and not a bener text or transmission of what has been learned, is the teacher's focus, " Wh at matters," they say, "is not one person's estimate of improvement or degener~tion, but the process of writing, responding, and writing 8.j!ain" (138), Hair<ton's proce" teacher<, on the other hand, "evaluate the written product by how well it fulfills the writer's intention and meets Ihe audience's needs" (86), Berthoff appears to share Knoblauch and Branoon's Sisyphean view of the student" learning' like them, she asserts that "the composing process rather than a composition i, Ithe,tudent's properl concern" Ol). The tcacher" job then i, to "cncourage students to compose continually, habitually" (4). Bertholf is nol worried that texts are nner finished. since more can be learned "from a dozen starts than from a single fini shed job" (4). Given such a pers pective, which ouiprocesses Hairston', ve"ion of writing as a proce.., Bertholf naturally agrees with Knoblauch and Brannon that papers "should not be 'graded'" (4)--they may not ever be finished! Bertholf explains her censure of grading by noting that "measurement is appropriate to what can be measured" (4). Allhough we might expect her 10 argue that writing cannot be measured, and therefore cannot appropriately be gradc<l, such i, not the case. "Compositions Can be factored and judged in terms analogous to those used in judging apples and egg'," 'he write" "bul Ihe price is high' we begin to atlend 10 the factors and not to the process" (4). The appeal of al1ending 10 the process and not some system of classification will be evident 10 anyone who has returnc<l a set of carefully anootated papers and watched stu_ dents Hip immediately to the grade on Ihe lasl page. nevcr to examine the paper again. Berthoff gocs on, however, as with Ihe other issues examined here, to complicate her own position: " Hut to say that writing should not be gr~ded is not to say that it,hould noi be evaluated" (5). Rather th.n ranking each paper by the traditionalleller grades, she advocates only two dasses. "pas. ' and "in' complete." Allhough these terms tend to obscure the fact that grading has taken place, th e class "incomplete" must contain Ihose examples excluded from "pass:' "Incomplete." students will quickly realize, is "not passing," momentarilyanyway. At Ihis point it may be useful to summarize Ihe differences in these three pcrspeclives, anempting some articulation of their underlying philosophies. At one end of an imaginary spectrum, valid classification. are possible. and hence (as in Hairston's pedagogy). stages in writina. kind s of writing, grading, the successful organizalion and transference of knowlc<lge are all possible. At the other end of thi. spectrum, language construct. reality---as Knoblauch and Brannon oay, "creating diseourse is equivalent to the process of coming to know" (51). Words and things arc ultimately separale, and our various classifications...,nect our composing, not realit y. Thus, (or Knoblauch and Brannon', teacher. t~ most

responsible lask is the undoing of studems' te~ts. showing them how any panic ular. personal act of composing is naturally open to decomposition from allot her point of view. Classifying pans of tbe writing procns. aims and modes. 1evd. of goodne.. and badne... and much else. denies the dynamic, situational. Heraclitean nalure of things, In bet... een Ihese two extremes. verbal class es~slagcs of... riting. kinds of... riting. and so fonh------are constructed, noi found. but Ihese conslruct' are submitted to social validation. Although... ords may not connecllo things in any pure. Adamic, unmediated way, communities by means of dialectic Can agree on a particular vision of realil y. and can even IC St and adjust it. Thus. as in Berthoff's pedagogy. from this in between orientation one's al1itude to... ard writing (and everything else) is ambiguously divided: grading. for example. makes sense (from a panicular vantage point. within a coherent community). and il doe.n t (in the abstract. or from a pluralistic stance). Which of these underlying philosophies of latl$uage should we endorse? And should we then embrace the resultitl$ pedagogy? The fi rst of these question. is not easily answered. Wh en Kn oblauch and lirannon declare. "The statement that words name 'things' in 'reality' is nol a matter of opinion: il is false" (7S). Ihey H)' noi only in the face of John,onian stone-kic king common sense. which lells me I can ask for a hul dog by name and cat it in reality. but they also igllore an impressive body of informed opinion 10 the contrary. To be sure. Knoblauch and Brdnnon cile impressive support for Iheir view, but many contemporary phi. losophers. especially philosophers of science. " 'ould agree with Richard Boyd Ihallanguage n Ul name things in reality. that cven metaphor. as Zenon Pyly shyn puts it. panicipales in "'the rcference fi,ing process by... hich linguistic usage eventually accommodates the 'causal' slruclure of Ihe world'" (425 ), J. L. Mac ki e ars ues that even words like "suicidc" refer "10 Ihe real e~i Sle nce of things" (90). AlthouSh thi s debate is a fascinatins o ne, for my purposes we need only ob-serve Ihal among serious scholars it is, ind""d. still a debate. In fact. according to RiChard Rorty. cenainly a name to conjure with in philo"'rhy. tbe history of philosophy from Loc ke to the present has focused on this very problem-unsuccessfully. Although it is essential Ihat writing leachers understand the issues involved. it may be unwise for us to wait on a consensus, Thus. my second question takes on a new shape: Which oflhese strikingly differem versions of process pedagogy should we then adopt? Knoblauch and Brannon's subjectivism, for example. seem$ to me a radically liberaling ped agogy ("intrinsically subversive:' as they sayi. aoo Ihe excitemem oflheir approach is nicel y captured in thi, quotation from Henry Miller. which Knoblauch and Brannon present as a stalement of what writing is really like: I begin in aboolut. choos and dark""... in abo!! or."'amp of idea' and <moho", and e.periences.... I am a man t.llinb tl>< ' 101")1 of his lire.. pr""ess whk".ppears more and mon: incxhau"ibt. a. I ~ on. Uke the world ot"t;"n it is.nd I... It i. a turning in si<le out.'.oyaging thr""ih X dimen,ions. with tile resultli'lat ""mewhere alons the way one diko"'" thot whal one h to tell i. not nearly so important as Ihe tdlio, ilsetf... From lhe.ery I><llinn in,. Im"'t I wa. deeply aware that there ;, no i<>'d. I ne.er hope to embrace th. whole. but merely to " in eac" sep.ni" fr"-l!ment, ea<h work. 11>< f.eling of the wo~d.s 1 io on. because I

am dininll deeper and <leeper into life, d.eper and deeper inlo """ and future, (qld, in Knoblauch aoo B",nn"" ~2) Such a slalemenllakes mo.l seriously wriling as a process, since "the teuing it_ self' is more imporlan! than whal is produced, Miller's Slatemenl highlights Knol>lauch and Brannon's refreshing commilment to nurturing the.iudent as a whoie person and n01 as an assemblage of unperfcclcd writing skills, a mecha_ nism for a serics of aelivilies: his slalement al,o susgesls their emphasis on Ule sludem's power 10 shape reality-the sludenl as romanlic adventurer, "voyaging" oul, as Mill er says, creating a personal world of meaning. II is easy to imagine how studenls might find Ihis Slance inspiring. On Ihe Olher hand, one wonders 10 whal exlen! all wriling Can usefully be Ihoughl of as a "Iurning in side out," a teuing of one's own life. Sometime. writen may,"'ell begin an endless story in "absolute ch"", and darkness," having "no goa]" other than 10 capture "Ihe feeling of Ihe world." BUI sometimes, surely. writers know what they want or need to say. Sometimes they cann01, as llerlhoff pui' il in a subjeclivi't momenl, design their own schemes and make,"'ords behave Ihe way they wanl them 10 (l I). Studenls who really view all writing as expressive. "open..cndcd." and "eternally renovalive" surely encounler serious problems in many,iluations-writing business teuers, progress report., legal brief., lechnieal instruclions, and many other pjojects requiring a reasonable subservience 10 fonn and eonlent. No doubl many of our students are too fol'used on grades (allhollllh their 0bsession is underslandable). and perhaps Knoblauch and Brannon'. philosophical OppOSilion 10 grading paptrs would help lransfer sludenls' auention to the bu.iness of karning, But, in ways unrelated 10 grading. Miller's..,mark that Ihere is "no goal" appears uncomforlably close to Knoblauch and Brannon', pedagogy: I have al ready noted bolh Knol>lauch and Brannon'. idea Ihat Ihe leach.r,hould dism antle Slu dent essay., pointing oul gaps and inconsistencies. and BenhofJ'. similar belief lhal studenls learn more from a dozen starts than a completed essay. Such a lack of closure, Ihwaning,tudents' sense of complelion and ac complishment. might well be fru.lraling and counterproductive, From a cerlain pe~peclive, then, Hairston', confidence is refreshing. AI least in her view Ihe teacher has something solid 10 Icach---a writing process. paltern, of various kind. of wriling, p..,cept. of what makes writing more and less,uc cessful. And the teacher can delermine if this something has been learned. In h.r texlbook, 10 be sure, HaiT'lIOn carefully cautions.tudenls about "pigeonholes'" that are "too neat and limited" (24), bul classificalion as.uch i. nol injwl"'rdy: more complicaled pigeonhole. would p..,sumably be more accurale (all hough more unwieldy), By the same token, in her description of the writing process. Hairsl0n reminds us lhal "the Slages can be highly flexibl e and their characteri.ti.. vary greally,'" bui.he.liillalks about "rh~ process" and "Ihe slages," For.ome teache~ _ such Imces of a monolilhic, unilary I"'radigm of Ihe writing process may well make Knoblauch and Brannon', relreat inlo mysticism and organicism more appealing; for othe~. such generalizalion and,implification de_ scribe wriling well enough to be.'aluable. BOlh positions have evident st rengths and weakne.se.

Of HaiT5ton ' ~ three kind ~ of writing. two-"mess.age writing" and "self contained wri(ing "~have lillie to do with writing as a mod e of discovery. Rather, ~cause Hairston assumes that ""otds do refer to thing., she tends to See writing as a t<>ol for trans mining information. Even when HairstQII talks about "disco,'ery;' the writer appears JIl()re to M uncovering or revealing some existing truth or in.ightthan cr(3ting or imposing meaning. It would M difficult to I..,. cate the informational, ex pository rort of writing Hai rston.tre.s". within Henry Mill er's statement or K!lC>blaueh and Branoon's pedagogy, Knoblauch and Brannon tend to see writing as an experience, not an implement; a mirror. not a window. Bertholf's divided epistemology may Mgin at this poinlto look rather allractive. Why can't we move b.ac~ and fonh from One world to another. drawing on the strengths of each orientation? T~ problem in such an alilanc. is implicitly raised in Roben M. HOiland's enthusiastic review of Bertholf', book, He writes; " By puuill$ the acti,'e mind at the center and conceiving writing as a particular operation of its fundamental processes. Iknhoff is able to revive torpid rhetorical terminology (classification, definition, cause and elfeet)" (198), Holland correctly senses here the essence of the problem, as 1 have outlined it; but he does not s.ay how Bertholf con.tructs a bridge from the active mind in process to static textual pallems. Itow ' he gets from language to world, linking a subjectivist view ("the active mind at the center") to an empirical one (modes of pre..,ntation-"classifieatiqii," for example) grounded in reality. The problem of reconciling the dilference, in these approaches, of creating workable and aniculated bridges, i. similar to the conflict inherent in invention ve.. us editing, coaching versus grading. expression versus persuasion. right brain versus left, and a host of other o~ition, enlivening our profession. We need somehow to move beyond such either/or choices. into a realm of both/and where our writing instruction Can self-consciously and coherently draw on or evolve out of confticting pedagogics. That is, perhaps, an impossible sentence I have just wrillen, but we might recall that the most useful view of light (to return to my staning point, physics). in,'olves..,eing it as a panicle and a wave. even though the two perspectives clash. When physicists arrive at the ultimate Theory of Everything. it may we ll involve fundamental contradictions. Developing the most powerful approach to writing instruction may involv~ a similar crea!ivi. ty. It will certainly involve understanding more clearly and in detail what many writing teachers already kbow in1uitively~!hat different versiob' of process teaching a~ cur~ntly available. Worb Ched Berlin. James, "ContempOrary Composition, The Major Pedagogical Theories." ColI~g~ E ~lilish 44 (1982): 765_77 Berthoff, Ann E. Formi~li. Thinking. Writing: Thr CompOJing [magination. Upper Montclair, NJ: Boynton, 1982. Boyd. RiChard. "What Is 'Metaphor' a Metapltor for?" Onony 35f>.408.

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