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English Literature 12 June 2003 Provincial Examination ANSWER KEY / SCORING GUIDE Topics: 1. Literary Selections 2. Literary Forms and Techniques 3. Recognition of Authors and Titles 4. Reading Passages 5. Shakespearean Drama 6. General Essay Multiple Choice Q K C S T Q K C S T 1. C K 1 1 16. B K 1 3 2. C K 1 1 17. A K 1 3 3. D K 1 1 18. B K 1 3 4. D K 1 1 19. A K 1 3 5. A K 1 1 20. D K 1 3 6. C K 1 1 21. C K 1 4 7. D K 1 1 22. B K 1 4 8. C K 1 1 23. A K 1 4 9. B K 1 1 24. A U 1 4 10. C K 1 1 25. A K 1 4 11. D K 1 2 26. D K 1 4 12. B K 1 2 27. B U 1 4 13. C K 1 2 28. D U 1 4 14. B K 1 2 29. A U 1 4 15. C K 1 2 30. C U 1 4 Multiple Choice = 30 marks 036litk - 1 - July 21, 2003

Written Response Q B C T S SECTION 2: 1. 1 H 4 15 (Score both) 2. 2 H 4 10 SECTION 3: 3. 3 H 5 10 (Score only one) 4. 4 H 5 10 5. 5 H 5 10 SECTION 4: 6. 6 H 6 25 (Score only one) 7. 7 H 6 25 8. 8 H 6 25 Written Response = 60 marks Multiple Choice = 30 (30 questions) Written Response = 60 (4 questions) EXAMINATION TOTAL = 90 marks LEGEND: Q = Question Number C = Cognitive Level T = Topic K = Keyed Response S = Score B = Score Box Number 036litk - 2 - July 21, 2003

SECTION 2: FAMILIAR PASSAGE INSTRUCTIONS: Read the following passage and answer the questions on pages 7 and 8 in the examination booklet. excerpt from Paradise Lost 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 What though the field be lost? All is not lost; the unconquerable will, And study of revenge, immortal hate, And courage never to submit or yield: And what else not to be overcome? That glory never shall his wrath or might Extort from me. To bow and sue for grace With suppliant knee, and deify his power Who from the terror of this arm so late Doubted 1 his empire, that were low indeed, That were an ignominy and shame beneath This downfall; since by fate the strength of gods And this empyreal substance cannot fail, Since through experience of this great event, In arms not worse, in foresight much advanced, We may with more successful hope resolve To wage by force or guile eternal war Irreconcilable to our grand Foe, Who now triumphs, and in the excess of joy Sole reigning holds the tyranny of Heaven. So spake the apostate Angel, though in pain, Vaunting aloud, but racked with deep despair; And him thus answered soon his bold compeer: 2 O Prince, O Chief of many thronèd Powers, That led the embattled Seraphim to war Under thy conduct, and in dreadful deeds Fearless, endangered Heaven s perpetual King, And put to proof his high supremacy, Whether upheld by strength, or chance, or fate; Too well I see and rue the dire event, That with sad overthrow and foul defeat Hath lost us Heaven, and all this mighty host In horrible destruction laid thus low, As far as gods and heavenly essences Can perish: for the mind and spirit remains Invincible, and vigor soon returns, Though all our glory extinct, and happy state Here swallowed up in endless misery. 1 Doubted: feared for 2 bold compeer: Beelzebub 036litk - 3 - July 21, 2003

40 45 50 55 60 But what if he our Conqueror (whom I now Of force believe almighty, since no less Than such could have o erpowered such force as ours) Have left us this our spirit and strength entire Strongly to suffer and support our pains, That we may so suffice his vengeful ire, Or do him mightier service as his thralls By right of war, whate er his business be, Here in the heart of Hell to work in fire, Or do his errands in the gloomy deep? What can it then avail, though yet we feel Strength undiminished, or eternal being To undergo eternal punishment? Whereto with speedy words the Archfiend replied: Fallen Cherub, to be weak is miserable, Doing or suffering: but of this be sure, To do aught good never will be our task, But ever to do ill our sole delight, As being the contrary to his high will Whom we resist. If then his providence Out of our evil seek to bring forth good, Our labor must be to pervert that end, And out of good still to find means of evil; Which ofttimes may succeed, so as perhaps Shall grieve him, if I fail not, and disturb His inmost counsels from their destined aim. John Milton 036litk - 4 - July 21, 2003

FAMILIAR PASSAGE from Paradise Lost (pages 1 and 2 in the Readings Booklet) INSTRUCTIONS: In paragraph form, using approximately 200 words, respond to the following statement. Write your answer in ink. 1. With specific reference to the passage, show that both Satan s and Beelzebub s responses to their present situation are different. (15 marks) Response: Satan Beelzebub confident ( all is not lost ) uncertain ( what if our Conqueror has left us our spirit to suffer?) stubborn ( That glory never shall his wrath or might extort from me ) proud ( To bow and sue for grace with suppliant knee were low ignominy and sham ) boastful unwilling to acknowledge defeat ( Vaunting aloud, but racked with deep despair ) determined ( wage by force or guile eternal war ever to do ill our sole delight ) defeatist ( our Conqueror whom I now believe almighty ) ( I see and rue the dire event ) humbled ( we may do him mightier service as his thralls ) submissive ( undergo eternal punishment do his errands in the gloomy deep ) Other responses are possible. 036litk - 5 - July 21, 2003

SIGHT PASSAGE INSTRUCTIONS: Read the following passage and answer the questions on pages 10 and 11 in the examination booklet. from Frost at Midnight 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 The Frost performs its secret ministry, Unhelped by any wind. The owlet s cry Came loud and hark, again! loud as before. The inmates of my cottage, all at rest, Have left me to that solitude, which suits Abstruser 1 musing: save that at my side My cradled infant slumbers peacefully. Tis calm indeed! so calm, that it disturbs And vexes meditation with its strange And extreme silentness. Dear Babe, that sleepest cradled by my side, Whose gentle breathings, heard in this deep calm, Fill up the intersperséd vacancies And momentary pauses of the thought! My babe so beautiful! it thrills my heart With tender gladness, thus to look at thee, And think that thou shalt learn far other lore, And in far other scenes! For I was reared In the great city, pent mid cloisters dim, And saw nought lovely but the sky and stars. But thou, my babe! shalt wander like a breeze By lakes and sandy shores, beneath the crags Of ancient mountain, and beneath the clouds, Which image in their bulk both lakes and shores And mountain crags: so shalt thou see and hear The lovely shapes and sounds intelligible Of that eternal language, which thy God Utters, who from eternity doth teach Himself in all, and all things in himself. Great universal Teacher! he shall mould Thy spirit, and by giving make it ask. Therefore all seasons shall be sweet to thee, Whether the summer clothe the general earth With greenness, or the redbreast sit and sing Betwixt the tufts of snow on the bare branch Of mossy apple-tree, while the nigh thatch Smokes in the sun-thaw; whether the eave-drops fall Heard only in the trances of the blast, Or if the secret ministry of frost Shall hang them up in silent icicles, Quietly shining to the quiet Moon. Samuel Taylor Coleridge 1 Abstruser: deeper 036litk - 6 - July 21, 2003

SIGHT PASSAGE excerpt from Frost at Midnight (page 3 in the Readings Booklet) INSTRUCTIONS: In paragraph form, using approximately 150 words, respond to the following statement. Write your answer in ink. 2. With specific reference to the passage, discuss the speaker s hopes for his child s future. (10 marks) Response: will be raised in the country will learn other lore in far other scenes will wander freely in Nature; thou shalt wander like a breeze will see and hear shapes and sounds intelligible / Of that eternal language, which Thy God / Utters will be moulded by Nature Great universal Teacher will be positively affected by all the seasons of the year; the seasons shall be sweet to thee Other responses are possible. 036litk - 7 - July 21, 2003

HOLISTIC PARAGRAPH SCALE A response may or may not show all of the features of any one scale point. 6 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 6 response is superior. The response is clearly organized and focused, and the analysis shows perception and insight. References and quotations are relevant and well integrated. The writing is fluent and the use of language is sophisticated. The response, however, need not be errorfree. 5 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 5 response is strong. The response is organized and focused, and the analysis is clear. References and quotations are relevant and well integrated. The writing is fluent and shows a strong grasp of the conventions of language. 4 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 4 response is competent. The response is organized, but the ideas may be simplistic or conventional. References are accurate, but may be limited. The response displays control of the conventions of language. Errors are present but may not be generally distracting. 3 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 3 response is barely adequate. Organization is present but may not support the flow of ideas. The development of ideas is limited and may be incomplete or superficial. References and quotations may be inappropriate or incorrect. The response displays limited control of the conventions of language. Errors may impede understanding. 2 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 2 response is inadequate. The response lacks organization and coherence. There is an incomplete or superficial development of ideas, which fail to address the topic. References and quotations are irrelevant or flawed. Language may be poorly controlled, inappropriate or colloquial. Errors are frequent and distracting. 1 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 1 response is unacceptable and shows a lack of understanding. It fails to address the topic and is undeveloped. No references are provided. There is a serious lack of control in the writing which impedes understanding. 0 Answer * The zero response has insufficient information to warrant a grade. It may be off-topic or simply a restatement of the topic. There is no writing on the page. 99 (No Response) *A score of 0 must be approved by the Chair or Vice-chair. 036litk - 8 - July 21, 2003

SECTION 3: SHAKESPEAREAN DRAMA Value: 10 marks INSTRUCTIONS: Suggested Time: 15 minutes Choose one of the three passages on pages 4 to 6 in the Readings Booklet. With specific reference to the passage, write approximately 150 words in paragraph form, in which you explain what the passage reveals about the character of the speaker. 3. Hamlet (1600 1601) The captain has informed Hamlet that Fortinbras is crossing Denmark on his way to Poland. Hamlet: How all occasions do inform against me And spur my dull revenge! What is a man, If his chief good and market 1 of his time Be but to sleep and feed? A beast, no more. Sure he that made us with such large discourse, Looking before and after, gave us not That capability and godlike reason To fust 2 in us unused. Now, whether it be Bestial oblivion, or some craven scruple Of thinking too precisely on th event A thought which, quartered, hath but one part wisdom And ever three parts coward I do not know Why yet I live to say, This thing s to do, Sith I have cause, and will, and strength, and means To do t. (IV. iv. 32 46) 1 market: profit 2 fust: grow moldy Response: Here Hamlet is revealed as shamed as he contrasts his inaction with the audaciousness of Fortinbras and his men. philosophical as he considers the nature of man. analytical as he attempts to understand why he has not carried out his father s revenge. honest as he considers possible cowardice. uncertain as he wonders why he has not acted when he has such will to do it. Other responses are possible. Criteria: Content and written expression Total: 10 marks 036litk - 9 - July 21, 2003

4. The Tempest (1611) Caliban enters carrying a burden of wood just before he meets Trinculo and Stephano. Caliban: All the infections that the sun sucks up From bogs, fens, flats, on Prosper fall, and make him By inchmeal 1 a disease! His spirits hear me, And yet I needs must curse. But they ll nor pinch, Fright me with urchin shows 2, pitch me i th mire, Nor lead me, like a firebrand, in the dark Out of my way, unless he bid em. But For every trifle are they set upon me; Sometime like apes that mow 3 and chatter at me, And after bite me; (II. ii. 1 10) 1 inchmeal: inch by inch 2 shows: apparitions 3 mow: make faces Response: Here Caliban is revealed as burning with hatred for Prospero. unrepentent in his opposition to Prospero. resentful of his treatment by Prospero. defiant even in the face of sure punishment. petulant in what he believes is unjust treatment. unwilling to consider any redemptive purpose in his labour. Other responses are possible. Criteria: Content and written expression Total: 10 marks 036litk - 10 - July 21, 2003

5. King Lear (1603) Cordelia has just informed Lear that she loves him according to her bond. When Lear reacts negatively, Kent attempts to intervene on her behalf. Lear: I loved her most, and thought to set my rest On her kind nursery 1. Hence and avoid my sight! So be my grave my peace, as here I give Her father s heart from her! Call France. Who stirs? Call Burgundy. Cornwall and Albany, With my two daughters dowers digest 2 the third; Let pride, which she calls plainness, marry 3 her. I do invest you jointly with my power, Pre-eminence, and all the large effects That troop 4 with majesty. Ourself, by monthly course, With reservation of an hundred knights, By you to be sustained, shall our abode Make with you by due turn. Only we shall retain The name, and all th addition 5 to a king. The sway, Revènue, execution of the rest, Belovèd sons, be yours; (I. i. 125 140) 1 nursery: caring 2 digest: absorb 3 marry: find her a husband 4 troop: accompany 5 addition: privileges Response: Here Lear is revealed as hurt and surprised; he was not expecting this answer and so believes he has been betrayed. bombastic and angry. uncomprehending of the entire situation; he bestows Cordelia s share of the realm on Regan and Goneril. irresponsible by attempting to divest himself of his duties while still retaining his titles and honour. proud; ironically he accuses Cordelia of pride. Other responses are possible. Criteria: Content and written expression Total: 10 marks 036litk - 11 - July 21, 2003

HOLISTIC SHAKESPEAREAN DRAMA SCALE A response may or may not show all of the features of any one scale point. 6 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 6 response is superior. The response is clearly organized and focused, and the analysis of character shows perception and insight. References and quotations are relevant and well integrated. The writing is fluent and the use of language is sophisticated. The response, however, need not be error-free. 5 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 5 response is strong. The response is clearly organized and focused, and the analysis of character is good. References and quotations are accurate and well integrated. The writing is fluent and shows a strong grasp of the conventions of language. 4 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 4 response is competent. The response is organized, but the analysis of character may be simplistic or conventional. References and quotations may not be integrated or supported. The response displays control of the conventions of language. Errors are present but may not be generally distracting. 3 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 3 response is barely adequate. Organization is present but the analysis of character is weak. References and quotations may be inappropriate or unsupported. The response displays limited control of the conventions of language. Errors may impede understanding. 2 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 2 response is inadequate. The response lacks organization and coherence. There is an incomplete, superficial or erroneous analysis of character. References and quotations are irrelevant or flawed. Language may be poorly controlled, inappropriate or colloquial. Errors are frequent and distracting. 1 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 1 response is unacceptable and shows a lack of understanding. There is a failure to understand the character. No references are provided. There is a serious lack of control in the writing, which impedes understanding. 0 Answer * The zero response has insufficient information to warrant a grade. It may be off-topic or simply a restatement of the topic. There is no writing on the page. 99 (No Response) *A score of 0 must be approved by the Chair or Vice-chair. 036litk - 12 - July 21, 2003

SECTION 4: GENERAL ESSAY Value: 25 marks INSTRUCTIONS: Suggested Time: 40 minutes Choose one of the following topics. In an essay of approximately 400 words, develop a concise, focused answer to show your knowledge and understanding of the topic. Include specific references to the works you discuss. You may not need all the space provided for your answer. Do not double space. You are encouraged to refer to works outside the Core Studies Readings List. 6. By reference to at least three literary works, show that the theme of each work is developed by the inclusion of a creature from nature. Note to markers: Students will not be penalized for utilizing only core works in responding to a question. Response: Core readings: Beowulf Whoso List to Hunt The Tempest To a Louse The Tyger The Rime of the Ancient Mariner Ode to a Nightingale Song Pretty Other works to which students may refer: To a Mouse The Darkling Thrush Shooting an Elephant Snake Hawk Roosting Many other responses are possible. Criteria: Content and written expression Total: 25 marks 036litk - 13 - July 21, 2003

7. By reference to at least three literary works, show that comfort is derived from different sources. Note to markers: Students will not be penalized for utilizing only core works in responding to a question. Response: Core readings: Beowulf Shakespeare s Sonnet 29 ( When in disgrace with fortune and men s eyes ) Shakespeare s Sonnet 73 ( That time of year thou mayst in me behold ) A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning On His Blindness Paradise Lost My Heart Leaps Up Apostrophe to the Ocean Ode to the West Wind Ulysses Elizabeth Barrett Browning s Sonnet 43 Dover Beach Song Other works to which students may refer: Shakespeare s Sonnet 116 ( Let me not to the marriage of true minds ) Easter Wings To Althea, from Prison I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud Lines Composed a Few Miles Above Tintern Abbey Composed upon Westminster Bridge, September 3, 1802 It is a Beauteous Evening, Calm and Free In Memoriam Many other responses are possible. Criteria: Content and written expression Total: 25 marks 036litk - 14 - July 21, 2003

8. By reference to at least three literary works, show that writers reveal the complexities of human relationships. Note to markers: Students will not be penalized for utilizing only core works in responding to a question. Response: Core readings: Get Up and Bar the Door Whoso List to Hunt My Last Duchess Hamlet, The Tempest, King Lear A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning The Rape of the Lock Dover Beach Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night Other works to which students may refer: Antigone The Canterbury Tales The Nymph s Reply to the Shepherd On My First Son Pride and Prejudice When I Have Fears That I May Cease to Be The Eve of St. Agnes The Lady of Shalott In Memoriam Hard Times Many other responses are possible. Criteria: Content and written expression Total: 25 marks 036litk - 15 - July 21, 2003

HOLISTIC ESSAY SCALE A response may or may not show all of the features of any one scale point. Essays that are not multi-paragraph (three or more paragraphs), or have fewer than 250 words will be deducted one scale point. 6 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 6 essay is superior. The essay is clearly organized and focused, and the analysis shows perception and insight. There is an excellent match of topic and selections, and literary references and quotations are relevant and well integrated. The writing is fluent and the use of language is sophisticated. The essay, however, need not be error-free. 5 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 5 essay is strong. The essay is organized and focused, and the analysis is clear. There is a good match of topic and selections, and literary references and quotations are relevant and well integrated. The writing is fluent and shows a strong grasp of the conventions of language. 4 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 4 essay is competent. The essay is organized, but the ideas may be simplistic or conventional. There is an appropriate match of topic and selections. Literary references are accurate, but may be limited. The essay displays control of the conventions of language. Errors are present but may not be generally distracting. 3 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 3 essay is barely adequate. Organization is present but may not support the flow of ideas. The development of ideas is limited and may be incomplete or superficial. There is a poor match of topic with selections, and literary references and quotations may be inappropriate or incorrect. The essay displays limited control of the conventions of language. Errors may impede understanding. 2 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 2 essay is inadequate. The essay lacks organization and coherence. There is an incomplete or superficial development of ideas, which fail to address the topic. References and quotations are irrelevant or flawed. Language may be poorly controlled, inappropriate or colloquial. Errors are frequent and distracting. 1 Answer The knowledge demonstrated in a 1 response is unacceptable and shows a lack of understanding. It fails to address the topic and is undeveloped. No references are provided. There is a serious lack of control in the writing which impedes understanding. 0 Answer * The zero response has insufficient information to warrant a grade. It may be off-topic or simply a restatement of the topic. There is no writing on the page. 99 (No Response) *A score of 0 must be approved by the Chair or Vice-chair. END OF KEY 036litk - 16 - July 21, 2003