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1 Great Barrier Reef - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral reef It is close too the coast of queensland australia. it is made up of nerly 3,000 coral reefs and over 600 islands, streching over 2,600 km long. It is so big, it can be scene from space! The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure maid by living things. because of it s enviromental significance, its has been listed as a important World Heritage Site by UNESCO. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

2 Great Barrier Reef - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral reef It is close too the coast of queensland australia. it is made up of nerly 3,000 coral reefs and over 600 islands, streching over 2,600 km long. It is so big, it can be scene from space! The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure maid by living things. because of it s enviromental significance, its has been listed as a Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph important World Heritage Site by UNESCO. Re-write the text correctly:

3 Great Barrier Reef - Answers The Great Barrier Reef is the world s largest coral reef. It is close to the coast of Queensland, Australia. It is made up of nearly 3,000 coral reefs and over 600 islands, stretching over 2,600 km long. It is so big, it can be seen from space! The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure made by living things. Because of its environmental significance, it has been listed as an important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.

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5 Great Wall Of China - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most significant man-made structures in the world built over 2,000 years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive km (5,500 mi) stretching east to west, winding up and down across grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus. Unfortunately some of the original sections ar now in ruins or no longr exist. work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind built the Great Wall was to protect china s boders from the nomadic warring tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and Mongolia. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

6 Great Wall Of China - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most significant man-made structures in the world built over 2,000 years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive km (5,500 mi) stretching east to west, winding up and down across grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus. Unfortunately some of the original sections ar now in ruins or no longr exist. work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind built the Great Wall was to protect china s boders from the nomadic warring tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and Mongolia. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

7 Great Wall Of China - Answers The Great Wall of China is undoubtedly one of the most significant man-made structures in the world. Built over 2,000 years ago, it is an architectural feat that this structure is still standing. The Great Wall of China spans an impressive km (5,500 mi) stretching east to west, winding up and down across grasslands, mountains, deserts and plateaus. Unfortunately some of the original sections are now in ruins or no longer exist. Work on constructing the Great Wall of China started as early as the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind building the Great Wall was to protect China s borders from the nomadic warring tribes, that came down from present day Manchuria and Mongolia.

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9 MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music on your MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud that you cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing more harm than good! MP3 players are a great source of entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius Hearing problems for young people today research has fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life. The ear piece are designed to fit firmly in the listeners ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear, potentially causing permanent dammage. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

10 MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music on your MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud that you cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing more harm than good! MP3 players are a great source of entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius Hearing problems for young people today research has fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life. The ear piece are designed to fit firmly in the listeners ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear, potentially causing permanent dammage. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

11 MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Answers Do you know how much time you spend listening to music on your MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud you that can t hear any outside noise? Well, you may be doing more harm than good! [MP3 players are a great source of entertainment, but they are also the cause of serious hearing problems for young people today. Research has found that young people are more likely to play their music too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life. The ear pieces are designed to fit firmly in the listener s ear canal, allowing outside noise to be eliminated. This means that the music is pumped directly into the ear, potentially causing permanent damage.

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13 The Solar System - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. The soler system is made up of eight planet s which orbit around the Sun The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are Uranus and Neptune. They are composed largely of ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane our solar system is located within one of outer arms of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200 billion stars. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

14 The Solar System - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. The soler system is made up of eight planet s which orbit around the Sun The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are Uranus and Neptune. They are composed largely of ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane our solar system is located within one of outer arms of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200 billion stars. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

15 The Solar System - Answers The solar system is made up of eight planets which orbit around the Sun. The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are Mercury, Venus, Earth and Mars. They are made up of rock and metal. The four outer planets are much larger. The two largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composed mainly of hydrogen and helium. The outermost planets are Uranus and Neptune. They are composed largely of ices, including frozen water, ammonia and methane. Our solar system is located within one of the outer arms of the Milky Way galaxy, which contains about 200 billion stars.

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17 Soccer - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal each end. The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the ball with there hands (with the exception of the goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball One of the reesons soccer is so popular is that it only takes a ball and a flat open area to play? Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

18 Soccer - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal each end. The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the ball with there hands (with the exception of the goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball One of the reesons soccer is so popular is that it only takes a ball and a flat open area to play? Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

19 Soccer - Answers Soccer (or football) is considered the world's most popular sport. In soccer, there are two teams of eleven players. It is played on a large grass field with a goal at each end. The object of the game is to get the soccer ball into the opposing team's goal. Players cannot touch the ball with their hands (with the exception of the goalie). They can only kick, knee or head the ball. One of the reasons soccer is so popular is that it only takes a ball and a flat open area to play.

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21 Dreaming - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. dreams are storys and pictures our brain s create when we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement! Some dreams are just you re mind playing with thorts and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity for you to make sense of your life dream experts also agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep having over and over propably have some sort of special meaning, Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will forget 90% them. Re-write the text correctly:

22 Dreaming - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. dreams are storys and pictures our brain s create when we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement! Some dreams are just you re mind playing with thorts and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity for you to make sense of your life dream experts also agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep having over and over propably have some sort of special meaning, Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will forget 90% them. Re-write the text correctly:

23 Dreaming - Answers Dreams are stories and pictures our brains create when we are asleep. Most dreams happen when we are deeply asleep and our eyes begin to move around quickly under our eyelids. This is called Rapid Eye Movement. Some dreams are just your mind playing with thoughts and images from life. Other dreams are an opportunity for you to make sense of your life. Dream experts also agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep having over and over) probably have some sort of special meaning. Although everybody dreams (including animals), we will forget 90% of them.

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25 Why our Bodies Need Water - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the human body too function and vital to hour Survival Although we can last week s without food, we can only survive a matter days without water. it is important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our lungs skin urine and faeces! All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75 percent water, One of our most important organs, our Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay hidrated to make sure our brain cells can function at the optimal level. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

26 Why our Bodies Need Water - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the human body too function and vital to hour Survival Although we can last week s without food, we can only survive a matter days without water. it is important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our lungs skin urine and faeces! All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75 percent water, One of our most important organs, our Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay hidrated to make sure our brain cells can function at the optimal level. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

27 Why our Bodies Need Water - Answers H2O, commonly known as water, is essential for the human body to function and vital to our survival. Although we can last weeks without food, we can only survive a matter of days without water. It is important for us to replenish our supply of fresh water every day, as we regularly lose liquid from our lungs, skin, urine and faeces. Although our bodies are made up of 50 to 75 per cent water, one of our most important organs, our brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay hydrated to make sure our brain cells can function at the optimal level.

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29 Bees - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. there are about 20,000 species of Bees in the world Bees live together in groups called colonys. There three types of bees in each colony! There is The queen bee the worker bee and the drone. The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees, Their only job is to mate with the queen-bee so that she can lay egs. Worker bees are Female and they do all the work. They clean and protect the hive. collect the pollen and necta to feed the colony and take care of the offspring. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

30 Bees - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. there are about 20,000 species of Bees in the world Bees live together in groups called colonys. There three types of bees in each colony! There is The queen bee the worker bee and the drone. The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees, Their only job is to mate with the queen-bee so that she can lay egs. Worker bees are Female and they do all the work. They clean and protect the hive. collect the pollen and necta to feed the colony and take care of the offspring. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

31 Bees - Answers There are about 20,000 species of bees in the world. Bees live together in groups called colonies. There are three types of bees in each colony. There is the queen bee, the worker bee and the drone. The queen is the largest bee in the colony. She is the only one that lays eggs. Drones are male bees. Their only job is to mate with the queen bee so that she can lay eggs. Worker bees are female and they do all the work. They clean and protect the hive, collect the pollen and nectar to feed the colony and take care of the offspring.

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33 Thunderstorms - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm? Thunderstorm s happen when warm, moist air quickly mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail. the loud sound that thunder makes caused by the heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear the thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last for severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos around the ground mountains, hills and building s. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

34 Thunderstorms - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm? Thunderstorm s happen when warm, moist air quickly mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail. the loud sound that thunder makes caused by the heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear the thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last for severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos around the ground mountains, hills and building s. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

35 Thunderstorms - Answers A thunderstorm is a storm with thunder and lightning. There is often heavy rain during a thunderstorm. Thunderstorms happen when warm, moist air quickly moves upwards. This causes clouds to form and creates gusty winds, heavy rain and sometimes hail. The loud sound that thunder makes is caused by the heat of the lightning that happens before you hear the thunder. Sometimes the sound of thunder can last for several seconds. This is because the thunder echoes around the ground, mountains, hills and buildings.

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37 Cathy Freeman - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. cathy freeman is won of the most well-known Indigenous australians. she was the first Indigenous Australian to win a gold medel at the Commonwealth Games (in Canada in Freeman competed in many championchip events through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won gold in the 400m event. freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman Foundation, witch works to close the gap in ejucation between Indigenous and non-indigenous student s. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

38 Cathy Freeman - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. cathy freeman is won of the most well-known Indigenous australians. she was the first Indigenous Australian to win a gold medel at the Commonwealth Games (in Canada in Freeman competed in many championchip events through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won gold in the 400m event. freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman Foundation, witch works to close the gap in ejucation between Indigenous and non-indigenous student s. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Re-write the text correctly:

39 Cathy Freeman - Answers Cathy Freeman is one of the most well-known Indigenous Australians. She was the first Indigenous Australian to win a gold medal at the Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994). Freeman competed in many championship events throughout the 90s. She was selected to light the torch at the Sydney Olympics in 2000, where she won gold in the 400m event. Freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with many charities. In 2007, she founded the Cathy Freeman Foundation, which works to close the gap in education between Indigenous and non-indigenous students.

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41 Journey into the Rainforest - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. carefully, I stepped threw an opening in the undergrowth of shrubs I stared with wunder at the beauty of the dark and humid rainforest? the rainforest was bursting wildlife. birds flew from branch to branch, singing joyfull songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another! Butterflies danced around the plants like graceful ballareenas. Tree ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for there nests elegant flowers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the forrest floor. i took a deep breath, watching and listening wonder. Soon, I wood need to retrace my steps and re-turn to life in my own world Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

42 Journey into the Rainforest - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. carefully, I stepped threw an opening in the undergrowth of shrubs I stared with wunder at the beauty of the dark and humid rainforest? the rainforest was bursting wildlife. birds flew from branch to branch, singing joyfull songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another! Butterflies danced around the plants like graceful ballareenas. Tree ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for there nests elegant flowers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the forrest floor. i took a deep breath, watching and listening wonder. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Soon, I wood need to retrace my steps and re-turn to life in my own world Re-write the text correctly:

43 Journey into the Rainforest - Editing Carefully, I stepped through an opening in the undergrowth of shrubs. I stared with wonder at the beauty of the dark and humid rainforest. The rainforest was bursting with wildlife. Birds flew from branch to branch, singing joyful songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another. Butterflies danced around the plants like graceful ballerinas. Tree ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for their nests. Elegant flowers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the forest floor. I took a deep breath, watching and listening in wonder. Soon, I would need to retrace my steps and return to life in my own world.

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45 Tropical Rainforests - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many countrys. Tropical rainforests have warm wet weather it is usually warm in every month the year. Tropical rain-forests also have very high rainfall! Tropicle rainforests are home to many plants and animals. some plants grow flower s and live close to the ground rainforest trees can grow very high. They make the verry top layer of the rainforest. Many animal s also live in the rainforest. Some of these include birds monkeys snakes, frogs and insects Sadly, tropical rainforests being cut down by humans? The area covered by rainforests around the world is getting smaller. Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph.!? SP Re-write the text correctly:

46 Tropical Rainforests - Editing Add editing marks to text. There are 20 errors. tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many countrys. Tropical rainforests have warm wet weather it is usually warm in every month the year. Tropical rain-forests also have very high rainfall! Tropicle rainforests are home to many plants and animals. some plants grow flower s and live close to the ground rainforest trees can grow very high. They make the verry top layer of the rainforest. Many animal s also live in the rainforest. Some of these include birds monkeys snakes, frogs and insects Editing Marks: Capital letter End punctuation Insert a word Change to lower case Take something out Check spelling New paragraph Sadly, tropical rainforests being cut down by humans? The area covered by rainforests around the world is getting smaller. Re-write the text correctly:

47 Tropical Rainforests - Answers Tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many countries. Tropical rainforests have warm, wet weather. It is usually warm in every month of the year. Tropical rainforests also have very high rainfall. Tropical rainforests are home to many plants and animals. Some plants grow flowers and live close to the ground. Rainforest trees can grow very high. They make the very top layer of the rainforest. Many animals also live in the rainforest. Some of these include birds, monkeys, snakes, frogs and insects. Sadly, tropical rainforests are being cut down by humans. The area covered by rainforests around the world is getting smaller.

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